Can someone help proofread this.?
Sunday, April 4th, 2010 at
8:48 pm
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"Any addiontal ideas are welcome." I suggest using the spell checker here.[**additional]
Using "today" with "has released" doesn’t fit.
Today, Apple released yet another product that onces [**once] again creates another step backwards in computer invocation [**innovation?] and freedom of choice while making a [**another ?] step forward into widespread vender lock, [**. ] This new device is called, [** remove , ] the IPad.
The iPad uses the same DRM locked down [** lock-down ?] technology that is also found [**insert on ?] many other of their products,[ **many of their other products or many of their products] including the iPod touch, iPhone, and iTunes.
You know … this is called capitalism. Being able to corner a market and keep it to yourself, your own way, yet having competition as well.
**yawn**
sorry to long for me to stay interested
Par.1 The nice device is called the iPad.